英作文(GTEC) - BiWA英語

どうも！

ここしばらく投稿してなかったので、久しぶりです。

みんな元気でしたか？

今年の1月に実施された英検で、僕が通っている学校の中2が１級に合格してしまって(ちょーびっくり、もうどうすればいいの？って感じで)衝撃を受けているところです。

僕は、高１の１学期に合格したので完敗ですね。

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また、１２月の中旬にGTEC for Studentsが学校で実施されてAdvancedを受けたのですが、結果が最近帰って来て、ライティングが170点満点(ぜえ、ぜえ、終わった後完全に満身創痍)だったので、今回は僕の満点答案をシェアしながら、英作文についてのアドバイスをして行きたいと思っております。

問

中学校や高校の授業では、英語の代わりにフランス語や中国語など他の言語を選ぶことができる方がいいという意見があります。あなたはどう思いますか。意見とその理由を書きなさい。

答案

Since English is mandatory to learn in many countries, there a lot of students who dislike English and want to study other languages, but I'm strongly of the opinion that only English should be learned. I'd like to offer a couple of valid reasons in support of my opinion.

Firstly, there are many more English speakers in the world than Chinese or French speakers, which means that if you are able to speak English, there will be exponentially more people you can share your ideas with or you can learn from. Surely this will give you infinite possibilities of meeting new people and success, enriching your life to the extent you cannot even imagine. For example, I made a lot of friends abroad using English over the past couple of years, and some of the friends helped me build my own company. My friends made me who I am today.

Secondly, many of the great movies and books in the world are in English, so if you can understand English, you could immerse yourself in those great works, and, as a result, you can enjoy your life. For example, I watched the movie called "The Martian" recently, and now I want to be an astronaut in the future. The movie completely changed my life for the better.

For these reasons, I firmly believe that all high school and junior high school students should choose English instead of other languages.

これで170/170です。

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